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Opowiadania by Anzu-Mazaki




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Your life is full of misery
Nothing's gone your way
I would simply love to help you
But there is a price you must pay.

Go ahead and make your wish
As long as you pay the toll.
'Cause even magic isn't free.
I'm afraid that's not in your control.

I will do what I can
Sign your name on the dotted line
What you want will be yours
And what you have will be mine.

Once the deal's been made,
There is no turning back.
There is no undoing,
You cannot break the pact.

So go ahead and make your wish.
Tell me, what is it that you want?
Perhaps all the gold and riches.
Or maybe true love's flaunt.

Now what you will give to me,
For I am a very particular man.
I do not want your gold and jewels,
I do not want your land.

Your first born is what I claim.
And you will give it to me.
Now go ahead and make your wish,
If you accept my fee.
Just something I wrote out of boredom.
Based off of abc's Once Upon A Time.
I'm not really sure if it is any good right now but oh well.
Perhaps I will scrap it later.
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AnaxErik4ever Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student Writer
:) Boredom often leads to the most interesting of things. It could stand a little editing, but I don't think it should be scrapped.
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Dragonia27 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
It's short, sweet and lyrical. I can see him writing this in his spare time. I think that you did a great job with this. Thank you for sharing it.
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Hizaki-sama Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Great poem, I love it. It's really well written.
And did you notice, that in the show nobody never reads that contract? And than everyone blames Rumplestiltskin for the price.
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vulpix15 Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is awsome I haven't seen the show YET but will sone as I can I have however read the fairy tale rumplstilzkin is from so it's not only epic but makes perfect sense
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Wow that's really great
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mangazach13 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
Don't scrap it!
Just fix where it says "Most" instead of "Must" in the 8th line and it'll be fine!
Sidenote: *hands him kid* Where do I sign?
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Samelie Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh wow, thanks for pointing that out!
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mangazach13 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
no prob!
Its great, don't get rid of it! you'll be denying people who can spell Rumpelstiltskin something awesome!
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